At long last, it’s here! This has been the hardest chapter by far to write. It’s the most important one, as its purpose was to fix what I felt was the greatest flaw of the original story; that being Ben and Riidya’s reconciliation, which I thought happened much too quickly but was forced by narrative time constraints. On top of that the Executive Dysfunction came down on me hard. The longer I spend working on any given thing the more I hate looking at it and the harder it gets to finish. When I was younger I’d just abandon my work and move onto the next thing whenever that happened, and I’ve got a giant pile of unfinished comics to show for it. Anyway, enjoy! Just one more chapter to go!
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